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Emperor Cross's scores:Participant :The Sublime @Emperor Cross
Host : The mean Fish @Gochi , the Big Tiger @Fire Tiger
Link to Start :https://thrillerbark.com/threads/beautiful-pirates.191/post-43467
Link to End : https://thrillerbark.com/threads/beautiful-pirates.191/post-56789
Cavendish and Suleiman are dead.
Emperor Cross : 8 posts
Gochi : 6 posts
Fire Tiger : 1 post
Your personality was ok at best. It wasn't as good as I was accustomed to. Could have been because of the absence of a story as the whole thing was just a fight but yeah, this the most I could give you.
Your desire to rank up was the best part about it, thus your 16 score.
Story Progression: 12
There was no story, just a fight. So I guessed it progressed well, if that makes sense. It was clean, quick, and it didn't feel forced or rushed.
Combat Prowess: 15
Nothing special here, it was plain average
Ok, so this is where I'm having the most problems with. There was a blatant lack of description in your posts. You only described the attacks and the reacts to them. Hardly anything else and even that was just basic. The most I saw was you describing what Shaarib was wearing and his hair. I couldn't get a good picture about anything from your view. You don't have to have superb description of everything but at least something on the scenery, the ships, etc to setup an image for the reader.
Post Count: 8
The most I saw from here was Suleiman's loyalty which was a bit subpar and it was just one thing to let us know what the guy was like. Moreover, I didn't get much from Cavendish either; all you had for him was in your second post. Again, it could be cause there was no story and y'all just fought immediately, so a personality can't be developed. Nonetheless, this is all I can give you.
Story Progression: 12
Combat Prowess: 13
You were pretty lacking in the description of your attacks. At best giving just a basic showing of them. For instance, he prepared to swing his haki-darkened blade at Shaarib's neck. This is pretty basic. You could have described the motion of the attack and the force and velocity he strikes Shaarib with much better.
Pretty good for the most part ignoring the combat.
Post Count: 6
Fire Tiger's scores:
Story Progression: 10
Combat Prowess: 0
Post Count: 1