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-PART ONE: AN UNWRITTEN ERA BEGINS!
My name is Jimmy Frayzah aka the Law Slicer and Captain of the Unwritten Pirates, as the papers have dubbed us. I swear I had a cooler name in mind but that douche of a reporter Milo had to take my words literally. I wasn't always a pirate though, I used to be a Marine Rear Admiral. Hell at one stage I was leader of the 169th Branch, a group that was often considered the future of the Navy and who knows, it still may be. But everything was not as it seemed, I would discover that a majority my life was fabricated by a bunch of lab coats that specialize in the fringe science of brainwashing. Faysal, a man I had once looked up to, orchestrated this after murdering my parents so I would follow in his footsteps as a Marine. I know, the dude's wack. So I would do what anybody would in my position, make a bold statement. Joined by my drunk of a brother Kane, I killed every Marine who wouldn't join my cause. Sure, they weren't guilty of what had happened to me but they weren't exactly innocent either.
So that brings me to my current predicament, one of those dead Marines was my navigator and without him, we don't have a clue where we're going. We managed to make it back to the East Blue using a spare Log Pose laying around but once we got here, nobody was able to interpret our maps properly so we just went with the ocean's flow. We sailed aimlessly for days without spotting another island, it's a good thing we had more than enough supplies for our skeleton crew. We passed the time by creating a Jolly Roger and training, as enemies of the World Government it's best to be ready for anything. Oh yeah, speaking of enemies, it appeared a unknown ship had been tailing us the entire journey from Punk Hazard but it stayed just enough out of our sight that I couldn't tell who it was. My first thought was that it was Shaarib, the Marine Commodore had plenty of reason to hate me after my recent actions but the Skypiean wasn't a man of patience and would've went straight for the kill. No, this was somebody else but who? I wasn't too concerned however, as finding some sign of land was my highest priority. Whoever our shadow was would reveal themselves with time.
Eventually though, we saw an archipelago in the distance. We decide to get to approach, it looked isolated and may be the perfect place to lay low for two or three weeks. We get closer but the cliffs looked too high for average humans to scale, if I were alone I could just use my Devil Fruit powers to fly up there, so we keep searching and eventually spot a beach with a slight slope leading into the large island. Deciding to make landfall here, we drop our anchors and make our way on our small wooden dinghies.
‘I wonder if there's even anyone on this island?’ I think as we finally step foot on sand for the first time in weeks.
Level 56
×5=280
Strength: 81 (66+15)
Speed: 71 (51+15+5)
×2=142
-Movement: 61
-Reaction: 81
Vitality: 81 (61+15+5)
×2=162
-Durability: 81
-Stamina: 81
Haki: 50
×2=100
-CoO: 19
-CoA: 81
Devil Fruit (Moku): 11
Martial Arts: 41
×2=82
-Ittoryu/Nitoryu: 82
×5=280
Strength: 81 (66+15)
Speed: 71 (51+15+5)
×2=142
-Movement: 61
-Reaction: 81
Vitality: 81 (61+15+5)
×2=162
-Durability: 81
-Stamina: 81
Haki: 50
×2=100
-CoO: 19
-CoA: 81
Devil Fruit (Moku): 11
Martial Arts: 41
×2=82
-Ittoryu/Nitoryu: 82
Name: Jimmy Frayzah
Affiliation:MarinesUnwritten Pirates
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Epithet: Unwritten, Mad Red, Law Slicer
Occupation: Captain
Devil Fruit: Moku Moku no Mi
Bounty: -
Age: 23
Date of Birth: April 22nd
Height: 6 ft 4 in (193 cm)
Weight: 225 lb (102 kg)
Laugh Style: Heh-heh-heh
Narration
“Talking”
‘Thinking’
Emphasis
Flashback
Physical Description:Personality:Frayzah would be fairly large among average sized humans but nothing special, he has a lean and muscular build. His outfit consists of a mask covering his eyes, a blue and white hooded jacket, black gloves, pants and boots. He has a black utility belt with detachable sheaths for his katana. He also wears a detachable sheath diagonally on his back for his ninja sword. Without his mask he is fairly pale with very short red hair and red eyes. His tail is about a metre long and covered in red fur.
Now wears a black and red coat with the Unwritten Pirates jolly roger instead of a Marine coat.
Theme Song:Frayzah can be pretty serious and stick to his missions but often goofs around, focuses on food or cracks jokes about enemies to throw them off, often to the point where they believe he is delusional. He is smart enough to know his own limits but always overcomes his fears. He hates everything about the World Government, especially Faysal and the Celestial Dragons. He has declared war against them for killing his parents and brother Jason, also for brainwashing he and his other brother into doing their bidding
Background:
Ship/Crew:My name is Jimmy Frayzah. First I was a vigilante then a Marine, a damn good one if I had to say. I believed in Justice but all I believed was I lie. The Marine that executed my parents, Vice Admiral Faysal, was instantly promoted to Cipher Pol and he thought it would be fun to capture me before turning me into his little pet project. For years, I was subject to torture and brainwashing, all so I would become his perfect successor as a Marine.
But little did he know that he created his own worst enemy. He underestimated me and I eventually saw the truth so I left the Marines, killing hundreds of them on my way out and it's only the beginning. Justice is dead to me now. I will end Faysal and I'll end anyone who stands in my way.
Abilities/Techniques:Frayzah has a standard Marine ship that he stole when he left, called the Bird of Prey. The Bird of Prey has a golden hawk figurehead, graffiti, and of course the flag of the Unwritten Pirates. Jimmy has also built an office/quarters area in the crows nest.
Jimmy's crew, the Unwritten Pirates, consists of the few former Marines that chose to side with him when he left.
‘Green Shot' Kane Queen (lvl35/NPC)
Age: 25
Bounty: -
Weapon: Crossbow
-
‘Blunt Blue’ George Kent (lvl35/NPÇ)
Age: 18
Bounty: -
Weapon: Baseball Bat
-
‘Faysal's Daughter’ Mia Black (lvl35/NPC)
Age: 22
Bounty: -
Weapon: Bow
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Gunmen×10 (lvl10/NPCs)
Stats: -
--Drawing Slice: Placing the sheathed sword upright and listening to the "breath" of his opponent, the attacker rapidly unsheathes, attacks, and resheathes their sword. An interesting note is that the user does the technique back-handed as opposed to from the waist with a standard grip on the sword.(21 Strength, 11 Mastery) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Spiral Slice: This attack uses the air itself to slash the target from a distance. To initiate it, the user first holds one of his swords horizontally above the shoulder of his sword arm, and then performs a circular swing that launches the air compressed projectile spiraling towards the target. (31 Mastery, 21 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Blazing Slice: Using one sword wielded in his left hand with his right hand gripping his left wrist for support (or vice-versa), the user jumps high up into the air and slashes his opponent. After slashing them, the user's opponent then bursts into flames from where they were slashed. (31 Mastery, 21 Strength and 21 Movement Speed) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Moon Slice: The user launches from his sword a crescent moon-like projectile of compressed air to the opponent with great speed, similar to Spiral Slice.(31 Mastery, 21 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Space Bound Slice: The user runs at and slashes their opponent quickly with an upward swing which knocks them high into the air. (31 mastery, 31 strength and 31 movement speed) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Cap's Shield: The user spins their sword in front of them self like a propeller, forming a half-transparent shield with the sword. Blocks projectiles if the opponent's mastery is lower than the user's. It can also be used offensively in a number of ways. (41 mastery, 31 strength, and 31 durability) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Pentagon Slice: The user performs five swift slashes to their opponent in swings of alternating angles to form a pentagon shape. Ideally, this technique targets all four limbs and the upper chest/collar bones. (41 mastery and 41 strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C-Destructive Drawing Slice: A stronger version of his original Drawing Slice. The user swings his sword in a very quick and powerful unsheathe move to slice his opponent. This attack is strong enough to easily decapitate a legendary beast like a Dragon.(41 Mastery, 41 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: B
-Fatal Spiral Slice: The user delivers a stronger version of his Spiral Slice, which is presumably 10 times stronger than the original.(51 Mastery, 41 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: B-Superior Slice: This technique consists of the user running towards his opponent with their sword held outstretched in one arm. He then executes a two handed overhead swing used to split his opponent into two from the top down.(61 Mastery, 61 Strength and 61 Movement Speed) Destructive Potency Rank: A
-Master Slice: After raising his sword above his head, the user delivers a powerful vertical slice to his opponent. This attack can easily slice through solid stone.(61 Mastery, 81 Strength and 41 Movement Speed) Destructive Potency Rank: A---Gust Slice: While airborne, creates a powerful gust of wind to knock opponents over. It can be done while standing on the ground. The user says this attack is very useful against a group of weak enemies.(21 Mastery, 21 Strength)
-Reaper's Scythe: A stance where two swords are held parallel so that the tips are pointing to his right or left side, this move is like a pre-requirement to perform: Hellish Slice, Demonic Slice, Satanic Slice, Heavenly Slice, and Cursed Slice.(41 Mastery)
-Hanging Scarecrow: A sword style stance that uses two swords. The user fully extends both arms out to each side, like a scarecrow. With the cutting edges facing forward, both swords are pointed to the sky. This move is a pre-requirement to perform: Joker's Slice, Deathstroke Slice. (51 Mastery)-Tornado Slice: The user holds his swords in front of him pointing up, like rhinoceros horns, and spins quickly.(21 Mastery, 21 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Chaotic Spiral Slice: Same principle as the Spiral Slice. Holding his two swords horizontally above the shoulder, the user then performs a circular swing that launches two air compressed projectiles spiraling towards the target instead of one, making it twice as powerful.(31 Mastery, 31 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Hellish Slice: Two air-based projectile slashes are sent upwards while jumping as the user swings his swords in an upward motion.(31 Mastery, 21 Strength and 21 Movement Speed) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Satanic Slice: Two air-based projectiles are sent forward after swinging both swords from the left or right side.(41 Mastery, 31 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Heavenly Slice: Two air-based projectiles are sent diagonally down and to the left or right after swinging both swords from the left or right.(41 Mastery, 31 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C
-Cursed Slice: A simple downward pound into the opponent with both swords.(21 Mastery, 21 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C-Deadly Drawing Slice: A dual sword drawing technique so powerful that it can split large obstacles in half. The user draws his swords, and sheathes them quickly, able to split two train carriages in half.(41 Mastery, 41 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: B
-Demonic Slice: Two air-based projectile slashes are sent downwards while falling as Frayzah swings his swords downwards, with the gravity complimenting the force of the attack.(51 Mastery, 41 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: B
-Joker's Slice: From the Hanging Scarecrow stance, the user swings both swords with extreme precision at the same time. This is done in a downward and diagonal motion to create a 'V' shaped air slash that leaves a wake of destruction in it's path. (51 Mastery, 51 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: B
-Deathstroke Slice: From the Hanging Scarecrow stance, the user unleashes a devastating sword combo. Running at the opponent if necessary, the technique involves diagonal-downward sword slashes that alternate between the right and left hands (Left/Right/Left/Right or vice versa). Usually totalling between 8-16 sword slashes. (51 Mastery, 51 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: B---Moku Moku no Mi - Smoke (Smoker)
Rank: A
Tier 1 boost: +5 speed
Tier 2 boost: +5 speed, +5 vitality
Tier 3 boost: +10 speed, +5 vitality
1-20 Basic Mastery
21-40 Adept Mastery
41-60 Skilled Mastery
61-80 Proficient Mastery
81-99 Excellent Mastery
100 Supreme Mastery
120 Absolute Mastery - Awakening
Logia turn based immunity is mastery/10 out of 10 turns.
Smoke is coloured red due to dye pills that Jimmy created.
http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Moku_Moku_no_Mi
-Seeing Red: The user shoots clouds of normal smoke from their arms and uses them to engulf their opponent, then makes the smoke dense to trap them inside. This attack can be used to ensnare many people at the same time.(31 Mastery)
-Red Snake: The user launches a long "snake" of dense smoke from their hand that they make follow the opponent until it hits and grabs them. This is sometimes followed by them thrashing their foe around.(31 Mastery)
-Red Spark: The user transforms their whole body into a cloud of dense smoke and charges at the opponent.(21 Mastery, 21 Movement Speed)
-Red Vine: The user transforms into a spiraling column of smoke to trap their enemies or to grab an airborne target. (41 Mastery, 41 Movement)-Red Blow: The user shoots a cloud of dense smoke from his arms to blast his opponent hard. After striking, they can then trap their opponent as with the White Out attack. They have another variation of this attack where they turn only one arm (except their fist) into smoke and launches the fist at their opponent as a long-range punch.(21 Mastery) Destructive Potency Rank: C-Red Launcher: The user transforms himself into smoke and launches themself at their opponent, then re-solidifies and pins their opponent down.(21 Mastery, 21 Movement Speed, 21 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: B---Cursed Sword: Gekkō no Kage (Moonlight Shadow), 61 mastery in a sword style, 50 reaction speed, 40 strength. Rumoured to be crafted by the same blacksmith as the Nikkō, this blade allows the user to manipulate existing shadows to hold or attack enemies but is weakened during the day. Cannot create shadows requires stats in its own Martial Arts substat; Moon Shadow. Range is based on mastery, mastery=metres(night), mastery÷3=metres(day) Test: beat the spirit in a battle.
1-20: Can manipulate 1 shadow within range.
61-80: Can manipulate 2 shadows within range.
81-99: Can make shadows slightly bigger. (No bigger than around 20% per shadow)
100: Can manipulate 3 shadows within range.------------
Equipment:
Swords:
-Doom Bringer/Peace Keeper (Ninja Swords)
60 cm long
Other:
61: Smog Hog: +(DF mastery/5) movement speed - 20 invention points (Need to buy to buy)
My name is Jimmy Frayzah aka the Law Slicer and Captain of the Unwritten Pirates, as the papers have dubbed us. I swear I had a cooler name in mind but that douche of a reporter Milo had to take my words literally. I wasn't always a pirate though, I used to be a Marine Rear Admiral. Hell at one stage I was leader of the 169th Branch, a group that was often considered the future of the Navy and who knows, it still may be. But everything was not as it seemed, I would discover that a majority my life was fabricated by a bunch of lab coats that specialize in the fringe science of brainwashing. Faysal, a man I had once looked up to, orchestrated this after murdering my parents so I would follow in his footsteps as a Marine. I know, the dude's wack. So I would do what anybody would in my position, make a bold statement. Joined by my drunk of a brother Kane, I killed every Marine who wouldn't join my cause. Sure, they weren't guilty of what had happened to me but they weren't exactly innocent either.
So that brings me to my current predicament, one of those dead Marines was my navigator and without him, we don't have a clue where we're going. We managed to make it back to the East Blue using a spare Log Pose laying around but once we got here, nobody was able to interpret our maps properly so we just went with the ocean's flow. We sailed aimlessly for days without spotting another island, it's a good thing we had more than enough supplies for our skeleton crew. We passed the time by creating a Jolly Roger and training, as enemies of the World Government it's best to be ready for anything. Oh yeah, speaking of enemies, it appeared a unknown ship had been tailing us the entire journey from Punk Hazard but it stayed just enough out of our sight that I couldn't tell who it was. My first thought was that it was Shaarib, the Marine Commodore had plenty of reason to hate me after my recent actions but the Skypiean wasn't a man of patience and would've went straight for the kill. No, this was somebody else but who? I wasn't too concerned however, as finding some sign of land was my highest priority. Whoever our shadow was would reveal themselves with time.
Eventually though, we saw an archipelago in the distance. We decide to get to approach, it looked isolated and may be the perfect place to lay low for two or three weeks. We get closer but the cliffs looked too high for average humans to scale, if I were alone I could just use my Devil Fruit powers to fly up there, so we keep searching and eventually spot a beach with a slight slope leading into the large island. Deciding to make landfall here, we drop our anchors and make our way on our small wooden dinghies.
‘I wonder if there's even anyone on this island?’ I think as we finally step foot on sand for the first time in weeks.