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    Since we're at the point where people are posting their own poem threads, I thought I'd make one for my poems.

    I know it's been a while since I shared any poems, but as I've got a lot of ideas for poems and it's just a matter of writing out words to express those ideas, I want to return to it.

    A swirling from within its mind
    A danger sensed, the unknown kind
    Reflexively it transforms its skin
    So to its surroundings, it blends in

    Often days spent lounging about
    Slowly breathing in and out
    Now it waits for the danger to pass
    Moving less than a blade of grass

    The unknown entity does draw near
    Into the lizard’s vision, from the rear
    A danger it is not, but rather prey
    A fly has passed it on this day

    Patiently does it wait in hiding
    Its time it is silently biding
    Waiting for the time to strike
    To catch a treat it will certainly like

    The witless prey is in position
    Nothing can stop the lizard’s mission
    With a flick of its tongue, the fly is gone
    The motion fast and the tongue long

    It looks around for anything more
    Unconvinced of what its sense was for
    Perhaps there was something different out there
    Something of which it was unaware

    It glances around in all directions
    Never lingering on certain sections
    It even looks directly behind
    And in that place, a bizarre find

    It hopes for a mere moment that
    The behemoth lurking, known as cat
    Is not getting ready to pounce
    But rather shaking the last curious ounce

    The cat fixates on something odd
    Not a mouse, nor a bird, nor a cod
    As briefly as it intently stared
    It turns away, as if prepared

    It jumps to the side, as if chasing prey
    The chameleon is safe this day
    But who, I wonder, let it out to play
    With a curious cat who’s owner was away?

    A hand reaching out in the darkness
    A beacon of joy remains sparkless
    Where has the world gone, he wonders
    Struggling with infinite necessity

    Hurting inside and out
    His restless mind wanders about
    Curdling thoughts that lack specifics
    Abandoned hope and help horrific

    Warden of all the dark and twisted
    Hampered truths, all limp-wristed
    The infinite necessity ever rings true
    His heartfelt cry turns a deeper blue

    Waking mind from sleeping heart
    The only avenue yet to start
    Photos of grass capture not what he sees
    The one bent rule out of infinite necessity

    Demons swarm an angelic place
    A fleeting pride turns to disgrace
    The whirling failure overwhelms
    No-one left to steer the helm

    Waiting for his final breath
    To be taken away by death
    Awaiting him, what he can see
    Is the plain of infinite necessity

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    Bobbing about for a sense of purpose
    The energy builds, creating a surplus
    Released as quickly as it came
    Propelled through waters all the same

    Thinking of nothing in particular
    Lining its body perpendicular
    To the clear ocean surface
    Bobbing about for a sense of purpose

    Sometimes up and sometimes down
    Never minding which way around
    Moves for however long it can
    Without a concept of ‘bigger than’

    Continuing life without forethought
    No qualms with what it has wrought
    Sometimes killer and sometimes prey
    Ever it goes upon its way

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    Avoidance is a void
    Falsehood unemployed
    Across the dark chasm
    Echoes spasm

    Truth and lies multiplied
    Yet to seek and cannot hide
    Find oneself bonafide
    The chasm is deep and wide

    Truism unplaced
    Revelations two-faced
    Nothing worth saying
    In the chasm one’s playing

    Light in the dark
    Plight in the park
    Wit for a walk
    Time for a talk

    Explained thoughts
    For nought and oughts
    Neglected feelings
    Unlucky dealings

    No end in sight
    No right to fight
    The dark chasm consumes
    The comfiest of rooms

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    The first of about seven poems that I'm currently proofreading. The next one will be the haiku, as for the sake of the collection, the haikus will be 5, 10, 20, 30, 45, 60. Anyway, enjoy Fountain of Truth, my intention with this poem is to return to the style of The Sword Fashioned From Wood and Metal.

    The brave explorers set off that day
    To find what was rumoured to be hidden away
    A fountain of legend that, so it’s told
    Spills not water, but makes truth unfold

    The pathway is old and broken
    The wind is cool and softly spoken
    No map to lead them where they go
    Following signs left by the wind’s flow

    Onward ever they march with hope
    A harrowing adventure grand in scope
    No matter the method, they follow the trail
    Hoping that surely they will prevail

    The fountain they seek was farther still
    Their army of men had fallen ill
    Hope running out in a strange land
    No-one to lend a helping hand

    Until a wizard warned and they heeded
    Then soon the medicine that they needed
    Was granted by that wizard’s power
    And the luck to find the fountain within an hour

    And so at last the quest concluded
    They proved that they were not deluded
    The fountain of truth flowed up ahead
    And in their minds a quiet dread

    This truthful essence the fountain spewed
    Provided the group with a vital clue
    As they began to speak the truth
    The secrets they hid since their youth

    “No trust for Jim, he’s a scoundrel fair.”
    “Why you lummox, you sat in my chair!”
    “Truth is a power we should not have sought!”
    “You would think that Austen, you’re easily bought!”

    Even the tame truths were enough to divide
    They could hardly believe every time they had lied
    To each other and to themselves, but worst of all
    It was the discovery that lead to their fall

    One day far from then, another group would find
    The fountain of truth and be caught in its bind
    There is no reward for proving it true
    Because if anything, it will disprove you

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    Two more poems proofread. So, I thought I'd share my new system: I challenge myself to do something every day, even if it's just one verse of one poem. When it comes to creating poems I use whatever small idea comes into my head and try to expand it. As with all my poems, they're mostly based on the abstract thoughts I come up with. Sometimes though, I feel a bit odd about them, like I didn't write it to be personal yet somehow I'm relating to it. Anyway, a new haiku sequence, It Stays Within, and a short but dark poem, Productivity.

    There is but nothing
    That can satisfy hunger
    Like a hearty meal

    Keeping the secret
    Can be difficult sometimes
    But you don’t have to

    Go on through the fog
    There is a place waiting for
    The day you arrive

    It stays within you
    The power to change it all
    For better or worse

    This time here is short
    So go make the most of it
    Before you cannot

    The question is multilayered
    The game is multiplayer
    Work hard, work harder still
    Achieve what you will

    Turning switches off or on
    Weighted heavily, pro or con
    Uptick, downturn, one more word
    Only one way to join the herd

    Work until you’re addicted
    Do better than predicted
    Keep thriving on the pressure
    Disregarding your own pleasure

    Start but don’t ever stop
    Regardless of getting to the top
    Hope your position satisfies
    As you buy and sell the lies

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    I just proofread the eight poems that I'd had written for a while and was just sitting on them. I don't know it took this long to read through them all, but I did it, and I think they're all good enough to add. Not gonna bother spacing these out, they've been finished long enough that I figured out should just share them all now. Also some have some interesting techniques that may be new to me and my poems.

    Big bliss, small success
    Tall tales, miniature madness
    Acquired afterthought, setting sun
    Relayed reflections, dance done

    Small sums, large loans
    Hearty houses, humble homes
    Witching worry, comforting calm
    Helpful hand, practical palm

    Advanced admiration, primitive play
    Heightened harmony, diminutive day
    Exercised energy, fateful flame
    Communicated cooperation, blustered blame

    Leaving lackluster, transmitted trail
    Obscure obligation, flatly flail
    Ever entangled, great gloom
    Yesterday’s you, especially entombed

    Ignition imminent, necessarily needed
    Just jumbled, circumstance ceded
    Kempt kaleidoscope, quickly quizzical
    Undue uncertainties, mostly miracles

    Valued vestige, immune imperative
    Tough track, soft superlative
    Nothing new, outdated old
    Instant italic, bravest bold

    A thought you never had before
    Hides away behind a door
    Unlock it from the left or right
    Force it into your line of sight

    One mere moment to realise it’s there
    Quickly reflect, but do not stare
    Imagine what was once briefly thought
    Examine the idea that you’ve caught

    Evaluate its worth to you
    Try to keep it if it rings true
    Jot it down before you forget
    For a good idea is a worthy bet

    Silently hold it close to your mind’s eye
    Without forgetting the how and why
    It came to you in the first place
    Let it settle into your creative space

    One event to define them all
    The wide horizon does surely sprawl
    Evolution is a slow crawl
    And the writing is on the wall

    A million years like a blink of the eye
    They’ll never comprehend the reasons why
    Because eventually all things die
    After the meteor, they said goodbye

    A day like any other except for
    The unfamiliar sight their eyes bore
    In the sky above a shooting star
    Coming closer from its place afar

    An intense heat from no discernible place
    As the object hurtled down from space
    No comprehension of what was to follow
    For soon their lives would be rendered hollow

    Silence soon, at once everywhere
    Leaving none to ponder there
    To reflect or prepare themselves
    Without a concept of time, no final twelve

    Dark and silent rock formation
    My expertise below your station
    I come but with one small task
    So now, I shall surely ask
    May I see what lies inside?

    I come with my wild imagination
    Awaiting your mild contemplation
    In your imposition I bask
    Hopeful that your secrets I’ll unmask
    And with my expedition turn the tide

    I could try but not succeed
    To disregard caution before I proceed
    The first steps I take into your domain
    Will be my resolve, I won’t remain
    So please, will I return alive?

    Your simple warning I did not heed
    And now I’m in most dire of need
    In this dark, I’ve gone insane
    My enthusiasm begins to wane
    I will surrender to the hive

    A camel’s back was broken
    Three eyes have hardly woken
    Time relates a story to space
    The one about the human race

    One day too long
    The response too strong
    Up in smoke does history go
    Most current life out the window

    A thought too little
    Down does the sanity whittle
    A catastrophe realised too late
    The falling of a symbol’s fate

    Twisting through the trodden roads
    A ghoulish sight gleefully goads
    Its prey to take action most foul
    And disappears with the screeching wind’s howl

    Only thoughts about nothing linger
    As the half-human beasts lick their fingers
    In this grave is where hope does lie
    It took no time for all of it to die

    Hurry, before it gets away
    The night surrendered to the day
    The delights have come out to play
    Moulded from the sun-like clay

    Jump into a strange land now
    Don’t ask me when, don’t ask me how
    Before it’s over, take a bow
    Delights and horrors start a row

    It’s a whirlwind of emotion
    That will never stop the notion
    As you down a strange new potion
    The whole world shines with devotion

    Modern sights come into view
    How absurd this new world seems to you
    Calmly does your mind eschew
    The various fears for something new

    A shine, a whisper, a sleeping beast
    All the commotion quickly ceased
    The view from here’s an eyeball feast
    Just turn your head to the east

    Strange lands abound within your head
    Shutting the book is what you dread
    This new adventure you want spoonfed
    Unsure of what you’d do instead

    Try as you might
    No end in sight
    All fight or flight
    Ev’ry single night

    Things fall apart
    From end to start
    None for weak heart
    Appreciate art

    Do endeavour
    Don’t say never
    Be forever
    Put back together

    Make an attempt
    Become exempt
    Your beard unkempt
    A trance that might tempt

    State your big dream
    Picking up steam
    Part of a team
    Is this what it seems?

    Feeling intense
    Trying immense
    Not making sense
    Truly being dense

    Not knowing where
    Too much to bear
    Gives you a scare
    You don’t even care

    Don’t give up hope
    Find ways to cope
    Your thoughts elope
    Examine the scope

    Reading the datafile
    Biggest shock in a while
    A revelation affects the core
    Aware of something more

    A split between two realities
    Truth emerging in spirituality
    Interest piqued by notable events
    But nothing ever quite making sense

    Sleeping in the den at night
    A sentient lifeform sensitive to light
    Slowly does the creature stir
    Once it hears a tiny whir

    Unsure of what to say
    The lifeform goes about its way
    Not sure what it hears
    To its mind comes many fears

    This the truth of the matter
    All its reservations soon do scatter
    As it registers with its eyes
    The two-may mirror it does despise

    This the bizarre comment’ry
    Lined with all the symmetry
    Unsure of what to make of nothing
    Trying to understand a simple something

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    Got four new poems.

    There was a big man named Stein
    Who spent hours a day in the mine
    Every gem that he found
    Made a sparkling sound
    But he cared not for the ev’ryday find

    He could scarcely believe his eyes
    For he was neither gracious nor wise
    But despite all his flaws
    His dog raised it paws
    And repaid his good friend in kind

    It were the best times of his life
    The times that were free of strife
    On the ground with his friend
    His broken heart would mend
    And he would attain peace of mind

    He was not the sentimental type
    But you’d find him hard pressed to wipe
    His emotions away
    When his dog wanted to play
    And put to a halt all the grind

    A speck in the universe
    The blue and green marble
    A place where creatures great and small
    Care not for ev’ryday marvels

    The highest mountain, the deepest sea
    One curious creature could never let them be
    This creature thought of itself, it was self-aware
    Yet didn’t think enough to show that it cared

    The end came sooner than expected
    The lack of foresight soon directed
    Where they went next
    This was the product of their evolution

    An enigma soured by the years
    Too short for a sense of scale
    Too long to make each moment count
    What did it mean, after settled dust

    Alarm bells pounding through a collective head
    Get it together or wind up dead
    Their hopes always turned to this or that
    Always whining like a spoiled brat

    Inches of time move by like a generation
    And soar through space like solar winds
    Not even asking about the contemplation
    That comes from all creatures within

    A sun could end it all eventually
    The moon came about incidentally
    The distance is far enough
    Life came about because of it all

    A swirling of meaning conceptualised in the mind
    Broken nothing but the silence of thought
    And soon enough that silence returns
    As exactly as it ought

    I won’t take even a single sip
    The smell’s enough to make my soul cry “Ick!”
    Now, I know what you’re thinking,
    “If he has no intention of drinking,
    Then surely he won’t get sick.”

    Pour it all out, down the drain
    To keep any around would be such a pain!
    Oh, but what of the reason
    This milk’s out of season,
    Well, I’ve waited too long again.

    There are many things that bother me,
    The unpaid bills, the letter C!
    What does this tangent have to do
    with sour milk, does ask you?
    I don’t know, leave me be.

    What do you expect, another verse?
    The sour milk’s thrown out, a pox, a curse!
    I’m afraid to say this poem’s done
    Go and get out in the sun
    Before I start thinking “I’m the worst.”

    Pull out my guts and give them a feel
    What do you think they’re saying?
    It’s kind of hard to hear them
    With all that skin and meat in the way

    Maybe if the world’s rotation meant something
    I would like to feel it moving
    But focussed on my own movement
    I can’t see too far ahead

    Where are these feet going?
    Are they going in circles?
    Why is that a good idea?
    Maybe I need to think a bit…

    Chase the calmness,
    Lead it to a familiar fence.
    That’s my heart,
    I need it now.

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