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[Sea]

Gotta respect Gambit longass title drop for one paragraph.

That's beyond Bleach level RP.

 

[Gambit]

 

[Guren]

Gotta respect Gambit longass title drop for one paragraph.

That's beyond Bleach level RP.

Nah he forgot some details for it to be a bleach level opening.

 

[Kaka]

Nah he forgot some details for it to be a bleach level opening.

There needs to be OSTs (custom made like when Guren made me some), GIFs, etc..

 

[Guren]

There needs to be OSTs (custom made like when Guren made me some), GIFs, etc..

I still have those privated, takes me back lmao.

 

[Kaka]

I still have those privated, takes me back lmao.

I also remember trying to photoshop to dress my character in Shinigami clothing, etc..

Good stuff xD

 

[Gambit]

Have no idea what a Bleach Level RP intro is but I will certainly want to take a look at it. I have been learning a lot of stuff since you guys joined here, to be honest.

Also, I created my own pirate logo from paint.

 

[Sea]

Have no idea what a Bleach Level RP intro is but I will certainly want to take a look at it. I have been learning a lot of stuff since you guys joined here, to be honest.

Also, I created my own pirate logo from paint.

The old forum died.

But I can write one for example.

 

[Kaka]

The old forum died.

But I can write one for example.

There goes 5 hours of your life

 

[Sea]

But to be fair Gambit wrote similarly to a bleach intro. His just missing an ost.

 

[Gambit]

I recently came up with OST, albeit it's not entirely an OST but a teaser trailer of my character.

It's in my bio.

 

[Sea]

Example of unnecessary description that you can see similarities in Bleach from your post:

"Suddenly, a gust of wind blew past him as he stared at the horizon, making his hair and coat flutter backward."

The wind blowing against the hair and flutter etc.

"This lineage factor...", Gambit spoke as he puffed a cigar which he held in his left hand. His right elbow is rested on the armrest of his throne, His back comfortably lying on its backrest, legs crossed."

Very specifically describing an action that would otherwise only take a line or two.

Don't get me wrong though, there's nothing wrong with it, it's just drawing similarities to how we used to RP in Bleach, even Guren and Kaka does it, including me.

 

[Gambit]

Example of unnecessary description that you can see similarities in Bleach from your post:

"Suddenly, a gust of wind blew past him as he stared at the horizon, making his hair and coat flutter backward."

The wind blowing against the hair and flutter etc.

"This lineage factor...", Gambit spoke as he puffed a cigar which he held in his left hand. His right elbow is rested on the armrest of his throne, His back comfortably lying on its backrest, legs crossed."

Very specifically describing an action that would otherwise only take a line or two.

Don't get me wrong though, there's nothing wrong with it, it's just drawing similarities to how we used to RP in Bleach, even Guren and Kaka does it, including me.

No offense taken. I am always receptive to feedback. Although, sometimes, I really intend to exaggerate my lines as if an image is being shown in slow motion on screen. If the motion is slow, I would use compound sentences to dictate the mood as if the time to freeze at that certain moment. If it's a rapid succession of attacks, I normally use concise and short sentences to sync the readers' mood to what is happening in the story.

But most of the time, I really don't notice lol.

I've done worse.

His entertained youth would abruptly shift to sheer resentment when the man in a loud hat and overly valentine shirt catapulted in his direction. He was pressing himself with a sword, attempting to lance a prince! "Imbecile!", he uttered as he scrutinized the swordsman across him.

The time has frozen for Gambit while looking at the other man. It was like a long parade of flower ladies, waiting for the arrival of the bride to the altar. Turtle race is way joyful to watch than an enemy humiliating his own self by fashioning a century-old trick. He could even feel the rays of the sun penetrating to his pores; the rustling of leaves in the forest registering to his ears; the saltwater breeze emanating to his senses; and the gusts of violent wind generated by the side duels.

To his resentment, he thought that I can't believe I was paired against this snot. He has to vanish in my presence! The forward thrust became a grasshopper in the meadow, grazing in bushy aster dandelion, approaching a ravenous red fox! Before he stung, the royal pirate eluded to his right.
Gambit's evasion was as smooth as the skins of the maidens he endeared before.

Rapidly, he drew a duo of the metal cards. Then he'd attempt to land a swift barrage of slashes to his preys. He would not only devour the one who wielded a blade but the other man brawling against his comrade! "LINK GET OUTTA HERE! ATTEND TO LARSI!"

The card master would deal a total of 54 deadly slashes to the body of his opponents, starting with Hatsu, one after the other. The attack was rapid, furious, and devastating enough to rip through his victim, rupturing them into shreds! And as he fused his haki to harden the weapon, he invoked, "MIDNIGHT SOLITAIRE, ALL OUT!"

 

[Sea]

In the old days for us if there is a general idea of how descriptive all 3 RP are, from the least to most is: One Piece, Naruto, Bleach.

I think the rest that have been in all 3 RPs can chip in. I personally have seen some OP rpers write only 2 lines before using first person. And of course Bleach with L vs Marsh being not only like 3 pages long but also I believe I once counted to have probably at least 50k words in total.

 

[Kaka]

In the old days for us if there is a general idea of how descriptive all 3 RP are, from the least to most is: One Piece, Naruto, Bleach.

I think the rest that have been in all 3 RPs can chip in. I personally have seen some OP rpers write only 2 lines before using first person. And of course Bleach with L vs Marsh being not only like 3 pages long but also I believe I once counted to have probably at least 50k words in total.

Damn I miss Marsh... and Firepowder
And obviously L and Nogori

And Hyuuga-sama... and Meepo...

 

[Sea]

I was once influenced by Kaka's style of writing before, and shameless copied it until he found out.

But now I think I'm more inspired to write similarly to Ellie, but his vocabulary is too much for me tbh.

 

[Ichimonji]

Also, I created my own pirate logo from paint.

That’s awesome. I also did the Spada flag, and love tf out of it. Your looks very Gambit-like.


I try not to write long, as writing too much is a weakness of mine, but then I end up writing the background. Iunno, to me it helps me visualize the tension and mood of the whole thing.

Like, it’s not just that Onigumo said “You’re here?”. It’s that he said it with disdain in his voice, biting his cigar, and squinting his eyes with jealous rage. You can feel the hate for Leo. All to say “Fuc** Leo”

 

[Gambit]

That’s awesome. I also did the Spada flag, and love tf out of it. Your looks very Gambit-like.


I try not to write long, as writing too much is a weakness of mine, but then I end up writing the background. Iunno, to me it helps me visualize the tension and mood of the whole thing.

Like, it’s not just that Onigumo said “You’re here?”. It’s that he said it with disdain in his voice, biting his cigar, and squinting his eyes with jealous rage. You can feel the hate for Leo. All to say “Fuc** Leo”

I tried searching for a template for the flag but couldn't find a good one so I just resort to this. And thank you. I thought ur flag was picked from the internet. It's pretty sexy.

 

[Sea]

That’s awesome. I also did the Spada flag, and love tf out of it. Your looks very Gambit-like.


I try not to write long, as writing too much is a weakness of mine, but then I end up writing the background. Iunno, to me it helps me visualize the tension and mood of the whole thing.

Like, it’s not just that Onigumo said “You’re here?”. It’s that he said it with disdain in his voice, biting his cigar, and squinting his eyes with jealous rage. You can feel the hate for Leo. All to say “Fuc** Leo”

Nowadays I like writing background or making smaller details more distinct around the characters/speech etc more than actions. Back in 2010 or something, writing a Bleach action say firing a Cero would usually go like:

Sea raises his outstretched hand with his index finger pointed towards Kaka as the remaining fingers points back at Sea, red reishi particles would start to gather by his fingertip, generating a red orb as it grows into a large sphere absorbing reiryoku. The sound of a distorted charging sound could be heard coming from the red orb as the red orb would finally explode and transform into a red beam of destruction as the distorted charging sound transforms into another distorted sound (Here old me and Kaka would follow up with the line: This is an indication of a Cero being fired), the beam firing towards Kaka aiming to destroy him with its destructive energy.

This is about 100 words for simply firing a Cero. I tried to write in that old Bleach RP style but I'm sure Guren and Kaka would immediately recognize it tbh. Current me wouldn't bother writing that much even if I were to write it in this particular style again lol.

 

[Gambit]

It still beautiful to read for me. It adds flavor to what you're trying to convey. In figures of speech, it's called exaggeration. Which is used to emphasize something.