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It still beautiful to read for me. It adds flavor to what you're trying to convey. In figures of speech, it's called exaggeration. Which is used to emphasize something.
You might like Ellie's style of writing as well I think.

But honestly if that's the case you'd probably fit into Bleach RP well.
 
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You might like Ellie's style of writing as well I think.

But honestly if that's the case you'd probably fit into Bleach RP well.
I'd definitely wanna be part of that. I've been writing poems and short stories since college and that's the reason I joined OJ RP. I'm a late bloomer in online forums. I wish I discovered this stuff earlier.
 

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After reading the new one piece chapter...

Either Oda knows dinosaurs better than the 'scientists' we have or OP have a skewed belief of how dinosaurs hunts. Drake's DF better have super long arms and the short arms are only because its retractable and proclaim this is how Allosaurs hunts in ancient times.
 
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After reading the new one piece chapter...

Either Oda knows dinosaurs better than the 'scientists' we have or OP have a skewed belief of how dinosaurs hunts. Drake's DF better have super long arms and the short arms are only because its retractable.
After what the Giraffe zoan could do I'm not surprised anymore about the weirdness from them. Still seeing a triceratops floating around like a helicopter was too weird even for Oda lmao.
 

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After what the Giraffe zoan could do I'm not surprised anymore about the weirdness from them. Still seeing a triceratops floating around like a helicopter was too weird even for Oda lmao.
More like after what Queen has done tbh.
 
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More like after what Queen has done tbh.
Nah Kaku's stuff with the giraffe zoan is still the og, the man wasn't even a cyborg. I mean he turned himself into a cube and launched his neck just like how Queen and King are doing. But that was maybe 6 years ago lmao.
 

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I feel like Kaku one whilst weird isn't too 'wtf' like Queen's tbh.

But it could also be how giraffe defended against predators in the ancient times. :pepesmug:
 
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Nowadays I like writing background or making smaller details more distinct around the characters/speech etc more than actions. Back in 2010 or something, writing a Bleach action say firing a Cero would usually go like:



This is about 100 words for simply firing a Cero. I tried to write in that old Bleach RP style but I'm sure Guren and Kaka would immediately recognize it tbh. Current me wouldn't bother writing that much even if I were to write it in this particular style again lol.
You forgot to add that the raw power that the Cero is generating is causing your own clothes and hair to flutter violently.

And you forgot to mention how as you're charging the Cero, you're staring at your opponent with sharp eyes - the light of your own Cero reflected in your eyes.

LOL
 

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You forgot to add that the raw power that the Cero is generating is causing your own clothes and hair to flutter violently.

And you forgot to mention how as you're charging the Cero, you're staring at your opponent with sharp eyes - the light of your own Cero reflected in your eyes.

LOL
I can tell you for a fact I don't write like that back in the day. The only reason is that I would never thought of these.
 
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I can tell you for a fact I don't write like that back in the day. The only reason is that I would never thought of these.
I'm just talking about general Bleach style, not yours specifically. xD
 

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I've also never seen people talk about their eyes like this in a fight. Maybe the fluttering but the latter is something I've never read before.
 
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I've also never seen people talk about their eyes like this in a fight. Maybe the fluttering but the latter is something I've never read before.
Gambit does that a lot of times when Kaka is hosting me. The eye thing is really my thing because it's part of my personality.
 
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Aight time to read Wano

Ok time to write up Wano... while I'm enjoying it, I also can't wait for it to be over so I can take a break from hosting for 5 people >_>
 
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Oh lord. This is turning into essentially 1 level 80 (Uteki) vs Kaidou with Yamato being out of it atm... Quite terrifying tbh, even with the ability to constantly create Mountain durability armor. >_>
 
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Oh lord. This is turning into essentially 1 level 80 (Uteki) vs Kaidou with Yamato being out of it atm... Quite terrifying tbh, even with the ability to constantly create Mountain durability armor. >_>
It's ok, La Spada just arrived to Onigashima. I hear she's a great team mate. Very polite and super mindful to not get her dear allies in trouble. :pandaevil:
 
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